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Vicky Smithton is a young detective in a small quiet city. Her mother is a vampire and her father was a witch. Being a half-blood made that she had to grow up in hiding by her grandmother. One day everything in her life is changing... A new partner and a strange case opens up a can of family secrets…


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Vicky Smithton is a young detective in a small quiet city. Her mother is a vampire and her father was a witch. Being a half-blood made that she had to grow up in hiding by her grandmother. One day everything in her life is changing... A new partner and a strange case opens up a can of family secrets…

48 review for Foresthill - A New Beginning

  1. 5 out of 5

    Halee Hartz

    I loved the plot and the characters but it was really hard to get beyond the grammar errors. If it had a good once over with an editing eye, it could easily be a 5 star book. It’s just a little hard to read as is.

  2. 5 out of 5

    Liz

    This is a pretty good story that combines fantasy, a murder mystery and a romance. The characters are good; the book is well paced; the plot is interesting. However, the book needs a lot of editing ... spelling, incorrect word usage, proper grammer, etc. Actually some of the mistakes are amusing (eg., admission for ignition) but many are confusing. I think it would be beneficial to have the book reviewed and corrected by a native English speaker. As I said, this has the bones of a worthwhile sto This is a pretty good story that combines fantasy, a murder mystery and a romance. The characters are good; the book is well paced; the plot is interesting. However, the book needs a lot of editing ... spelling, incorrect word usage, proper grammer, etc. Actually some of the mistakes are amusing (eg., admission for ignition) but many are confusing. I think it would be beneficial to have the book reviewed and corrected by a native English speaker. As I said, this has the bones of a worthwhile story but needs to be reworked. I won a copy of this book in a Goodreads giveaway for this honest review.

  3. 5 out of 5

    Femke

    I loved the story and read it with joy. I look forward to part 2 I read the book again and now the edited version. The author had sent me a new copy. I'm happy with the new version. While I did not mind the grammar mistakes in the old version, I can understand someone would. I still love the book but the newly edited version is defiantly an improvement I loved the story and read it with joy. I look forward to part 2 I read the book again and now the edited version. The author had sent me a new copy. I'm happy with the new version. While I did not mind the grammar mistakes in the old version, I can understand someone would. I still love the book but the newly edited version is defiantly an improvement

  4. 4 out of 5

    Heather

    This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers. To view it, click here. I hoped to love this book. Everything about it is right up my usual alley. But the typos were distracting, and I almost wondered if the author used English as a second language (and then, upon reading the authors bio discovered that to be the case). The story was good, and I definitely think a good editor would make this story a great read. For the author, your story and characters are great. You have a wonderful understanding of the English language. There are just nuances in the writing of the I hoped to love this book. Everything about it is right up my usual alley. But the typos were distracting, and I almost wondered if the author used English as a second language (and then, upon reading the authors bio discovered that to be the case). The story was good, and I definitely think a good editor would make this story a great read. For the author, your story and characters are great. You have a wonderful understanding of the English language. There are just nuances in the writing of the vernacular that made this stand out. I read this book and left the review as part of the Goodreads giveaway. Thank you so much for the opportunity to read your work.

  5. 5 out of 5

    Monique

    Good book. Story is easy to follow...

  6. 4 out of 5

    Gina Zappa

    I was so excited when I won this book through a goodreads giveaway, I always love a good fantasy story.

  7. 4 out of 5

    Rita

    Really liked the story but it needs editing. There are so many grammatical errors that it interfered with the story. It appeared to have been edited by a computer.

  8. 5 out of 5

    M. Dutchy

    To all, that left reviews of my book and send me feedback., thank you. You made me take a second look at the grammar of my book. I had it edited so from October 2020 a new version from my book Foresthill A New Beginning is available. If you bought a book before October 2020 please send me a personal message or email me at [email protected] and I make sure you get a new copy free of charge. Again, thank you all, please keep sending me the feedback you make me a better writer!

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