FBI Director Madeline Mills hasn't always been in charge of the FBI Academy. She was a rookie once and like all new officers she made mistakes. Hers was so monumental that she was exiled to the wilds of Kansas. Being the only Agent for miles was pretty boring until a couple of kids came up missing. Leading the hunt into the supernatural Madeline discovers that you never re FBI Director Madeline Mills hasn't always been in charge of the FBI Academy. She was a rookie once and like all new officers she made mistakes. Hers was so monumental that she was exiled to the wilds of Kansas. Being the only Agent for miles was pretty boring until a couple of kids came up missing. Leading the hunt into the supernatural Madeline discovers that you never really know what being hidden truly means.
Watch Where You Dig: From the Federal Witch Universe (Holiday Tales Book 1)
FBI Director Madeline Mills hasn't always been in charge of the FBI Academy. She was a rookie once and like all new officers she made mistakes. Hers was so monumental that she was exiled to the wilds of Kansas. Being the only Agent for miles was pretty boring until a couple of kids came up missing. Leading the hunt into the supernatural Madeline discovers that you never re FBI Director Madeline Mills hasn't always been in charge of the FBI Academy. She was a rookie once and like all new officers she made mistakes. Hers was so monumental that she was exiled to the wilds of Kansas. Being the only Agent for miles was pretty boring until a couple of kids came up missing. Leading the hunt into the supernatural Madeline discovers that you never really know what being hidden truly means.
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Maggie –
This was the best of the 3 tales in Holiday Tales short stories. You should REALLY read the Federal Witch books first to know who the characters are. If you like those, then the set of short holiday stories are a bit of added free fluff.
Patrick –
The writing was good but I didn't realize that it was either a novella or a very long short story. The story consisted of the background universe for a series about supernatural creatures and the FBI. The main character was great and blended in well with the locals in her new assignment. The small town cast was also done well but by the time you have an idea of how this society works, the story is over. The interactions and dialogue create a fun and funny little story. The background is beautiful The writing was good but I didn't realize that it was either a novella or a very long short story. The story consisted of the background universe for a series about supernatural creatures and the FBI. The main character was great and blended in well with the locals in her new assignment. The small town cast was also done well but by the time you have an idea of how this society works, the story is over. The interactions and dialogue create a fun and funny little story. The background is beautifully sketched but unless the next volumes are longer (and I'm sure that they will be), there isn't enough room for the further necessary development of the main character, let alone a new cast. The background also needs a lot more room to completely finish that part of the story setup. This writer promises a pleasant read but until I see a more complete novel length book, I won't know if the series is going to be good or not. I think that I'm going to volume 2 to find out.
Susan Otto –
Another great story from the federal witch universe This story covers the early years director Madeline Mills. In the early years she was transfer to an out of the way place in Kansas. She is one of the people trying to find three boys that went missing. This is the short story about her and what she found. The character of Madeline Mills is one of a young rookie, FBI Academy trained , and intelligent. The plot is a simple one of a kidnapping and misunderstanding. This is a great short story and as Another great story from the federal witch universe This story covers the early years director Madeline Mills. In the early years she was transfer to an out of the way place in Kansas. She is one of the people trying to find three boys that went missing. This is the short story about her and what she found. The character of Madeline Mills is one of a young rookie, FBI Academy trained , and intelligent. The plot is a simple one of a kidnapping and misunderstanding. This is a great short story and as all of the short stories goes in more depth of the characters portrayed. Highly recommended. bookwormsuzy
Alison Duffy –
Good but. I really enjoyed this Very Short book. But. One of the characters names changes suddening right in the middle. (Joshua - Jason) It confused me enough for a few moments that it distracted from the mood and hurts the story, imo. Also, this could have been longer. I 'm used to being left wanting more at the end of a good book but this book was short enought to have just been a chapter in another book. Perhaps once there's a few more 'Holiday Tales' in the series they'll condence them... an Good but. I really enjoyed this Very Short book. But. One of the characters names changes suddening right in the middle. (Joshua - Jason) It confused me enough for a few moments that it distracted from the mood and hurts the story, imo. Also, this could have been longer. I 'm used to being left wanting more at the end of a good book but this book was short enought to have just been a chapter in another book. Perhaps once there's a few more 'Holiday Tales' in the series they'll condence them... and then explain how this story (book one) relates to the Holidays? O.o
Gil Mulrooney –
Dear Mr. Paul. Really not a book, more like a short story. In the 30's it might have been referred to as a "chap" book. Please think about reducing the "numbers" of books you're producing, and concentrate on story detail. It's really about story quality, not book quantity. It's almost like you're trying to write a book about every character from every book, but after a few of these shorter tomes, I feel as if I've eaten fast food. More tiny unicorn, less ancillary character books? Please? Dear Mr. Paul. Really not a book, more like a short story. In the 30's it might have been referred to as a "chap" book. Please think about reducing the "numbers" of books you're producing, and concentrate on story detail. It's really about story quality, not book quantity. It's almost like you're trying to write a book about every character from every book, but after a few of these shorter tomes, I feel as if I've eaten fast food. More tiny unicorn, less ancillary character books? Please?
Jim Kratzok –
Nice background story. This book introduces is to a young Madeleine Mills as an FBI rookie. She has some interesting mishaps which aren't exactly career builders and totally ticks off her higher ups. Assigned to a non-existant office in the middle of nowhere, and takes on a case and does all right.... Nice background story. This book introduces is to a young Madeleine Mills as an FBI rookie. She has some interesting mishaps which aren't exactly career builders and totally ticks off her higher ups. Assigned to a non-existant office in the middle of nowhere, and takes on a case and does all right....
Peter Trist –
A great little side trip into the background of the federal witch What the title of this review says pretty much covers it all. I found this to be an entertaining last book to read on the last day of my holidays.
John Piper –
Loved this story! The Federal Witch universe is one of my favorites!
CONNIE BALTHROP –
This story helps to understand more about the Federal Witch storyline.
Cory Cravens –
Good Well, this was a great start to a good book. It makes me want to read the rest of it. Wherever it's at. I'm really digging the Federal Witch universe. Good Well, this was a great start to a good book. It makes me want to read the rest of it. Wherever it's at. I'm really digging the Federal Witch universe.
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