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At twenty-seven, Raven Anderson experienced more heartache than anyone would in their lifetime. Finally, her life seems on track when she starts doing what she loves the most; teaching second grade. However, the best-laid plans are not always the right path as Raven learns when fate puts her in the direct path of mega-billionaire, Jaxson James Phillips, owner of Raiders, I At twenty-seven, Raven Anderson experienced more heartache than anyone would in their lifetime. Finally, her life seems on track when she starts doing what she loves the most; teaching second grade. However, the best-laid plans are not always the right path as Raven learns when fate puts her in the direct path of mega-billionaire, Jaxson James Phillips, owner of Raiders, Inc., a corporate raiding company. With the spotlight now focused on Raven, her past is threatening her future. So, she does what she does best—run! This beautiful girl, with the violet eyes, has left Jax, who never gets rattled, totally speechless. Used to getting what he wants, he can’t understand why she’s running from him. As time goes on, he slowly unravels the many layers of Raven. What he finds . . . puts everyone around them in danger. Can anyone survive? Mature audiences only. This is not a stand-alone.


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At twenty-seven, Raven Anderson experienced more heartache than anyone would in their lifetime. Finally, her life seems on track when she starts doing what she loves the most; teaching second grade. However, the best-laid plans are not always the right path as Raven learns when fate puts her in the direct path of mega-billionaire, Jaxson James Phillips, owner of Raiders, I At twenty-seven, Raven Anderson experienced more heartache than anyone would in their lifetime. Finally, her life seems on track when she starts doing what she loves the most; teaching second grade. However, the best-laid plans are not always the right path as Raven learns when fate puts her in the direct path of mega-billionaire, Jaxson James Phillips, owner of Raiders, Inc., a corporate raiding company. With the spotlight now focused on Raven, her past is threatening her future. So, she does what she does best—run! This beautiful girl, with the violet eyes, has left Jax, who never gets rattled, totally speechless. Used to getting what he wants, he can’t understand why she’s running from him. As time goes on, he slowly unravels the many layers of Raven. What he finds . . . puts everyone around them in danger. Can anyone survive? Mature audiences only. This is not a stand-alone.

30 review for The Unraveling of Raven

  1. 5 out of 5

    Amy

    Oh! Oh Yeah! This debut book hit all 5 stars just right for me! It is FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC!!! Jax is the best billionaire character that I have read. Before you start think to yeah another rich and dominant man, think again he is nothing like your billionaires of the past- Christian or Jesse. This author have managed to capture an awesome vulnerability and playful side in Jax that is wonderfully refreshing. Raven is equally charming and you will love and latch onto her character immediately. Somewha Oh! Oh Yeah! This debut book hit all 5 stars just right for me! It is FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC!!! Jax is the best billionaire character that I have read. Before you start think to yeah another rich and dominant man, think again he is nothing like your billionaires of the past- Christian or Jesse. This author have managed to capture an awesome vulnerability and playful side in Jax that is wonderfully refreshing. Raven is equally charming and you will love and latch onto her character immediately. Somewhat naive but also persistent in her own right, she and Jax are a perfect combination. If you think this story is all about their quest to find love, you are wrong. I have developed lasting attachments to all the characters, Jackie, the best friend and Max, the body guard. This book takes you through so many twists and turn, you won't know what is coming next. There is of course the steamy sex and the love story; by there is also mystery and suspense that will have you tearing through the pages to see what happens next. I cannot wait for book two to see how this story continues. Utterly perfect debut Ms. Sederholt!! Congratulations, you have left me with the best book hangover I have had in a long time!

  2. 5 out of 5

    ♠ Becka & Cerys ♠ | Spitfire Reviews

    For more, check out Smut & Spitfire Books No longer an ARC, I bought it. DNF 40% What I read was 1.5 - 2 Stars, the other 60% may be better but I didn't stick around to find out, if you want to brave it, more power to you. I wanted to like this book so badly that it was almost physically painful to dislike it to such epic proportions. *Caution: Rant ahead.* We'll start with why this book bothered me: There was SO much potential. Potential the story just didn't live up to. From the blurb it s For more, check out Smut & Spitfire Books No longer an ARC, I bought it. DNF 40% What I read was 1.5 - 2 Stars, the other 60% may be better but I didn't stick around to find out, if you want to brave it, more power to you. I wanted to like this book so badly that it was almost physically painful to dislike it to such epic proportions. *Caution: Rant ahead.* We'll start with why this book bothered me: There was SO much potential. Potential the story just didn't live up to. From the blurb it seemed to be a solid 4 star read, however, I was disappointed... Well, firstly the book is in dire need of an editor in every single way known to mankind. The speech does not flow, there are errors in typing and grammar, and the entire 40% I read was punctuated appallingly. Seriously, I know in grade school they say: "Put a comma when you take a breath," but they didn't mean every single time you breathe in, even if you don't want to pause the sentence. This was my main bone of contention with the novel. No matter how many times I read a page, I just wanted to smash my laptop screen in anger, half of it made no sense. The sheer volume of repetition of her violet eyes staring into his soul and him repeating the same sentiment in his POV literally not 2 lines later really irked me. The repetition of many cliche things similar to C.G and A.S bothered me. Like the whole earlobe thing- WTF? Does this man have an earlobe fetish?! Next was the characters. See, originally this seemed like a really poor FSOG fanfic (Maybe it was, she even had a thing for plum dresses) Possibly, I'm a little biased. I loved Fifty Shades and I read many fanfics by great authors, some whom turned out to be great writers, like Jane Harvey Berrick, however, this just didn't work. In this story we have an abused heroine, however, we see no development to her, she's supposed to be some shut off runaway but on their third meeting, second date, she just blurts out her whole life story in one incredibly long paragraph that left me feeling very cold. I felt no empathy for her due to lack of connection to the characters. The hero "Jax" and his best friend "Max" (not only does that get confusing, it also gets really irritating.) are said to have this bond that we're not shown, it's stated they're best friends and he says maybe one line in the story, the rest he spends doing as he's told.  Another issue was the POVs in this story: There was no guidelines in the book as to when the POV was changing. I'm not a book snob that won't read first person present tense, although, I prefer to avoid it - I'll still go there, it's sometimes nice to be in the characters shoes. In this case you, for the most part couldn't really tell whose shoes you were filling as it flits between the characters at random intervals and they both have eerily similar thoughts. On the brighter side: All this could be fixed by getting an editor. This is exactly what they're paid for - I'm also sure there are many here on G.R.

  3. 5 out of 5

    Loraine Oliver

    This novel was so well written that I am sure it is a great indication of things to come. A few facts are as follows: 1 This is Theresa's first book. 2 The book is well written. 3 The book held my interest from the first page- I did not have to read halfway through to decide if I liked it or not. 4 The book has a cast of wonderful characters that were everything you would want in a book. 5 The plot is well thought out, and has so many twists and turns it will keep you thinking about it long after you This novel was so well written that I am sure it is a great indication of things to come. A few facts are as follows: 1 This is Theresa's first book. 2 The book is well written. 3 The book held my interest from the first page- I did not have to read halfway through to decide if I liked it or not. 4 The book has a cast of wonderful characters that were everything you would want in a book. 5 The plot is well thought out, and has so many twists and turns it will keep you thinking about it long after you have finished the book. 6 This book it part one of a trilogy. There is a cliff hangar, just so you know. This book is about a woman named Raven, who is 27 years old. Raven teaches 2nd grade at an exclusive school. Raven had a horrible life, and so now is just trying to live a normal life. Raven is a beautiful woman, and yet she does not realize it. All Raven wants is a peaceful life without any problems. She lives with her roommate Marco. She has one friend named Jackie who was her roommate in college and now teaches at the same school she does. Raven avoids the spotlight at all costs. When one looks at Raven, they can see the lingering sadness in her eyes. Jaxon is the main male character in the book, and a billionaire who owns a company called Raiders Inc. and he is very high profile, he has a bodyguard named Max, who goes with him everywhere, and heads up his extensive security team. who is also his best friend. Jaxon is a take charge kind of man who has to control everything and everyone, in his family as well as his company. He is single and has no girlfriends even though there are so many women who would love to catch this rich, powerful and very handsome man. He also has a vulnerable side to him that no one sees, except for his Mom, sister and Max. His sister and mom try to tell him what to do, yet they know his love keeps them safe, and always has. When Jaxon was small his father left his family, and he grew up fast and took charge of his family back then and he does not let it be any other way even though his sister is married, Jax still is involved in her life and that of his nephew, he keeps them all safe. Every morning Raven stops at Starbucks and gets a coffee to go for work. She also buys the homeless man across the street water and breakfast every day and they are friends and he looks out for her in his own way. He did several tours in Iraq and now a veteran, he is hopeless. One morning she is in a rush, not watching where she is going, and runs right into Jaxon and gets coffee all over them both. Jaxon takes one look at her and her violet eyes captivate him, leaving him speechless for once in his life. Raven apologizes and takes off. Later the same morning having to go to the school to stand in for his brother in law at his nephews "bring a parent to school day", they both are stunned to see each other once again. Raven does what she does best- she runs and Jaxon is hot on her trail. He goes through all kinds of channels to find out about who she is including asking the Barista at Starbucks and the homeless man about her. What happens you will have to find out when you read it! This story is filled with angst, mystery, secrets from Raven's past that are so horrific that you can't believe she is so sweet and yet so vulnerable and unable to let herself go and trust anyone, a vicious man from Raven's past, plot twists and turns, love, desire, friendship and so much more in a little over 400 pages. Be prepared to give yourself time to read this, you will not be able to put this book down until you have finished. I loved this book and can't wait for part two to come out! Do yourself a favor and read this book, you will be glad you did, I am! I gave this book a 5***** Star rating!

  4. 4 out of 5

    Lustful Literature

    ** JOSIE'S 4 STAR REVIEW ** After I read the blurb to The Unraveling of Raven, I was very interested in getting my hands on it. Once I started reading I could not put it down. I thought the author really did an amazing job with the characters in this story as well as the overall development of their relationship. I loved that the author gives readers a love story that isn’t all about sex but Theresa also throws in secrets, danger and betrayal. I did not who to trust or what was going to hap ** JOSIE'S 4 STAR REVIEW ** After I read the blurb to The Unraveling of Raven, I was very interested in getting my hands on it. Once I started reading I could not put it down. I thought the author really did an amazing job with the characters in this story as well as the overall development of their relationship. I loved that the author gives readers a love story that isn’t all about sex but Theresa also throws in secrets, danger and betrayal. I did not who to trust or what was going to happen next. Raven Anderson is a very complicated character with an even more complicated past. Despite her complicated past, her character is strong, unique, secretive, sassy, feisty, caring and courageous. She has been living behind the scenes and keeping a low profile since a very young age. At the age of 27 she finally has some stability in her life and she is comfortable. She loves her job teaching 2nd grade students and has an amazing roommate and best friend, Marco, that she has been friends with since high school. Raven and Marco live a very structured, organized and simple life. While running late one morning she accidentally spills her coffee all over this beautiful man. Jax Phillips is CEO of Raiders. A company that takes over businesses that are going under. He is a billionaire, and HOT!. Instead of being upset that his shirt has gotten ruined by this lady with the violet eyes, he is captivated with her and wants to know more about her. He spends that morning speaking to the barista in Starbucks, to the veteran on the corner anyone that give him a name and nothing else. Fate has plans for Jax and Raven. They are both stunned to see each other when he goes with his nephews to “Bring your Parent to Class Day”. Jax is a total alpha male when it comes to Raven. He is determined to convince Raven to go out with him. After his relentless and dominant pursuit, she gives in and over time the two develop a relationship. Let me just say, Raven is skeptical of being a relationship because that means she will have to reveal her past and she is not sure Jax can handle it. Holy smokes not only is Jax gorgeous, but the man is HAWT in the SEX department. I kid you not, keep some dry panties handy because it gets really steamy. Jax is a target because of his billionaire status. When threats start to stream in targeting not only Jax and his family but also Raven, the demands are not adding up. Jax, Raven, Marco and Jax’ security team needs to find out if the threats have anything to do with Raven’s past. This is where the author switched the plot from just a love story into an amazing suspense novel. The author threw in so many twists and turns that it kept me constantly guessing. I was questioning everyone in the book because whenever I thought this person was a good character – BAM – the author added a twist. I didn’t know who to trust. I was literally biting my nails up until the last page of the novel because I needed to know what was going on. I can’t wait to find out the rest of Jax and Raven’ story, as well as some of the other characters. This is one nail biter you don’t want to miss out on.

  5. 4 out of 5

    Imy Santiago

    An impressive and incredible suspenseful and romantic debut! This is a peer review. “That’s bulls***. If you want this man, then fight for him. If you want a safe and happy life, then fight for it, but don’t fu***** sit there and do nothing.” –Marco, in The Unraveling of Raven As a writer spending countless of hours staring at a screen creating stories, it is nice to step away and immerse myself into a good book, and lose myself with the characters my colleagues create. I want to be swept away. Ha An impressive and incredible suspenseful and romantic debut! This is a peer review. “That’s bulls***. If you want this man, then fight for him. If you want a safe and happy life, then fight for it, but don’t fu***** sit there and do nothing.” –Marco, in The Unraveling of Raven As a writer spending countless of hours staring at a screen creating stories, it is nice to step away and immerse myself into a good book, and lose myself with the characters my colleagues create. I want to be swept away. Having said that, prior to reading this debut novel by Sederholt, I was in a major book funk. That is until I met an enigmatic CEO and delicious alpha male by the name of Jax. What was a fleeting encounter at a coffee shop turns into something more. Enter Raven, an elementary school teacher who is also a spunky, sassy yet incredibly endearing young lady. She has endured a world of crippling loss and pain. This heroine is proof that while your past can cripple you it cannot define you, because you are the maker of your own destiny. Together, Raven and Jax will take you on a journey filled with twists and turns that will have you flipping through the pages excitedly. Their personalities are opposite, but when put together they are magic. Sederholt takes you on a journey of introspection knitting a wonderful web of drama, suspense, action, and ultimately, love. I commend Sederholt for creating a magnificent universe in the streets of my own backyard: New York City. She brilliantly captures the vibrancy and energy of the city; from the no-nonsense attitude to the smells and sounds of a city I now call home. “Really, lady? If it looks or tastes good, spit it out, damn it!” –Raven in The Unraveling of Raven “Well, I could stand here and feed you a line of bulls***.” –Jax in The Unraveling of Raven For a debut novel, The Unraveling of Raven is an incredible piece of fiction that should be read by those who love a good suspenseful read, but also love a sensual, sexy, and often squirming read. Let me tell you, I found myself on the edge of my seat more often than not… So “HAWT!” I look forward to reading the next installment in this Unraveled Series! This novel does end in a cliffhanger which has me eager to jump into the next installment: Darkness Into Dawn. This debut novel comes with my seal of approval. Brava, Sederholt.★★★★★HAZELNUT SPREAD stars from me!

  6. 5 out of 5

    Kathy Wideman

    This book is about a girl named Raven. She is a second grade teacher who lives with her friend Marco. One day she is running late for work, she gets her coffee order and as she is walking out walk straight into a man and spills the coffee all over the both of them. Jaxson is the man she ran into he is immediately attracted to Raven. Later at work his sister Bella asks him to attend bring a parent to school day for his nephew because her husband can’t make it. He says he will go. What good luck h This book is about a girl named Raven. She is a second grade teacher who lives with her friend Marco. One day she is running late for work, she gets her coffee order and as she is walking out walk straight into a man and spills the coffee all over the both of them. Jaxson is the man she ran into he is immediately attracted to Raven. Later at work his sister Bella asks him to attend bring a parent to school day for his nephew because her husband can’t make it. He says he will go. What good luck he has as his nephew’s teacher is the woman who ran into him this morning. He asks her out and she says no. People don’t ever run from him and this woman has ran twice. He runs into at a restaurant later that evening. He takes his chance to talk to her and they talk for hours. They begin to see each other and are immediately drawn to each other. He takes her to a charity event that weekend and that’s when things start to get interesting. He brother lets them know that he have been receiving threats. Then the next threat they get involves Raven. Jax is beyond mad. He will do everything in his power to protect his family and Raven. What will happen next? Will these people follow through with their threat and kidnap either of them or both? Who is behind the threats? I loved this book. It was different. There were lots of twists and turns. Very steamy at times. The characters drew me into the story and I couldn’t wait to find out what happened to them next. Well written and engaging. It was emotional at times and I loved it. I love how alpha male Jaxson and his friend Maxwell are. They are great for Raven and her friend Jackie. The girls aren’t totally helpless, they stand up for themselves and the people they love. Jaxson’s whole family is great. They get right to the point and don’t sugar coat things. They love whole heartedly. I can’t for the next book to find out what happens to Maxwell.

  7. 4 out of 5

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    ***5 Stars*** Wow.... I really LOVED this book! Raven is a grade school teacher and is running late. She makes her daily stop to get her coffee before going to work and as she is literally running out the door, she runs into Jax (Jaxon James Phillips), owner of a company called Raiders Inc. and spills coffee all over herself and Jax. She literally apologizes and runs out the door leaving Jax wondering who the beautiful girl with violet eyes is, that left him speechless. He ends up meeting her aga ***5 Stars*** Wow.... I really LOVED this book! Raven is a grade school teacher and is running late. She makes her daily stop to get her coffee before going to work and as she is literally running out the door, she runs into Jax (Jaxon James Phillips), owner of a company called Raiders Inc. and spills coffee all over herself and Jax. She literally apologizes and runs out the door leaving Jax wondering who the beautiful girl with violet eyes is, that left him speechless. He ends up meeting her again later that day when he is attending a class for his nephew at the same school where Raven happens to work and as luck has it, Raven is also his nephews teacher. Jax and Raven's chemistry is instantaneous, however Raven keeps turning Jax down and that is something that Jax is not used to. He has always gotten what he wanted....until now. Raven never lets anyone get close to her except for a handful of people. She has experienced some traumatizing events in her life and is afraid to let her walls down. As the story unfolds, secrets, betrayal and danger come into play. Will everyone be safe from the secrets that unfold? Will Jax and Raven find love and the happen ending that they both want? Will the people closest to them be the ones they can trust? There are many different twists in the story that have you wondering what is going to happen next. The story not only involves Raven and Jax, but also Max (Jax's best friend and head security) and Ravens best friend Jackie. The story will end in a cliffhanger so be prepared. I can't wait until the next book in the series "Darkness into Dawn" to come out!! I would definitely recommend this book!!

  8. 4 out of 5

    Anny hernandez

    I was provide a copy of the book by the Author for an honest review. I just finish reading this book, and I love it, I am so glad that I got to read it, now I cant wait for the next book, I love the characters, but I did not like the ending, now I don't know how long I have to wait for, I am gone keep this short since I don't want to give anything away. Raven had gone through a lot for her age, now that she is twenty seven years old, she is living life step by step, she is a second grade teacher, I was provide a copy of the book by the Author for an honest review. I just finish reading this book, and I love it, I am so glad that I got to read it, now I cant wait for the next book, I love the characters, but I did not like the ending, now I don't know how long I have to wait for, I am gone keep this short since I don't want to give anything away. Raven had gone through a lot for her age, now that she is twenty seven years old, she is living life step by step, she is a second grade teacher, and she loves her job, on the day that her class was having bring your parent in, her roommate Marcos was banging on her door for her to wake up, when she seen the time she started to rush, once she make it to starbucks for her regular drink, when she is walking out she run into the handsome sexy Jax, now Jax is the owner of a corporate raiding company called Raiders Inc. when Raven look up she say sorry and takes off running, now Jax is left outside the store with a wet shirt of coffee, he tried to find out who she is, once his on his office his sister goes to ask him for a favor, when he agree to go to his nephew school, he never though that his nephew teacher was Raven, from that moment on he knew he wanted her, but Raven kept running from him, will she cave in or keep running. I love the way that Jax and Raven are with each other, I really love and enjoy reading this book, I cant wait for book two, Author Theresa Sederholt THANK YOU for introducing me to this amazing characters and this awesome book love it.

  9. 5 out of 5

    Debbie Collins

    Great debut!! Now, if I can just hold on until the second book comes out, what a cliffhanger! This book is loaded with twists and turns, and every time I thought I had something figured out, here comes another OMG moment, that I did not see coming. This is the story of Raven Anderson and Jaxson Phillips. Raven is simple, beautiful, headstrong, a little naive, and as beautiful on the inside as she is on the outside. She has a very giving heart and a past that even she does not know all the detail Great debut!! Now, if I can just hold on until the second book comes out, what a cliffhanger! This book is loaded with twists and turns, and every time I thought I had something figured out, here comes another OMG moment, that I did not see coming. This is the story of Raven Anderson and Jaxson Phillips. Raven is simple, beautiful, headstrong, a little naive, and as beautiful on the inside as she is on the outside. She has a very giving heart and a past that even she does not know all the details of. Jax is a billionaire, who is handsome, smart, possessive, protective, but he also has a vulnerable side. He is funny and has a very touching relationship with his nephew. This is not just a story of two people finding each other and falling in love, these two barely have time to get to know one another, before they hit another bump in the road. Not only did I fall in love with Jax and Raven, but also with her best friend, Jackie, and his best friend Max. There seems to be a lot more to Max, than meets the eye, hopefully we will get a closer look at him, in other books. Jax has a great family, who is not afraid to speak their minds, and Mick is a treasure. I cannot say more without giving away too much, but if you love to read a book not only loaded with romance, steamy sex, but also mystery and suspense, then this book is definitely for you. Theresa Sederholt, you did a fantastic job and I am anxiously awaiting the next book!!

  10. 4 out of 5

    Tina Lee Harris

    4.5 stars This book is more than your usual billionaire meets young girl, they fall in love and live happily ever after. Theresa did an amazing job in keep us on our toes with all the twist and turns to the very end of the book. Raven Anderson violet eyed beauty with hair as black as a raven doesn’t have a clue how beautiful she truly is. She has endured more than most do in her short life. She is loyal to the people that she considers her family and will do anything to keep them safe. As she lite 4.5 stars This book is more than your usual billionaire meets young girl, they fall in love and live happily ever after. Theresa did an amazing job in keep us on our toes with all the twist and turns to the very end of the book. Raven Anderson violet eyed beauty with hair as black as a raven doesn’t have a clue how beautiful she truly is. She has endured more than most do in her short life. She is loyal to the people that she considers her family and will do anything to keep them safe. As she literally spills into Jaxon Phillips life, nothing is the same after that. Jaxon Phillips, billionaire, smart, sexy as hell, witty, protective of what is his. He does not do love, he did once. He has it all until Raven crashes into his life one morning and nothing is the same after seeing those violets eyes. As they seem to be thrown together again, Jaxon has to know more about Raven. He gets what he wants at all cost even his own heart. The supporting characters are just as charming. I feel in love with Jackie the best friend, Max the body guard, and Jaxon’s family. There is more than just romance, hot sex scenes and drama in this book. There are twists throughout the turning of the pages of this book until the last page. This is a cliffhanger but leaves you wanting more of Raven and Jaxon’s life. I am excited to see what book 2 has in store for us.

  11. 5 out of 5

    Kizzy

    I just finished this book and wow! this book was recommended to me and I'm glad I read it.! Once you start, you will get hooked :) Raven literally bumps into Jax at the coffee shop. From there we see the attraction they have for each other. the one thing with her is she runs alot when she cant handle alot and that makes jax crazy lol. who would have known that she was his nephews 2nd grade teacher..talk about fate. the two of them together are hot and they kept getting hotter. he was so protecti I just finished this book and wow! this book was recommended to me and I'm glad I read it.! Once you start, you will get hooked :) Raven literally bumps into Jax at the coffee shop. From there we see the attraction they have for each other. the one thing with her is she runs alot when she cant handle alot and that makes jax crazy lol. who would have known that she was his nephews 2nd grade teacher..talk about fate. the two of them together are hot and they kept getting hotter. he was so protective of her and they both were experiencing new feelings as their relationship progressed. I just loved them together "Oh", "yeah, oh" (you'll understand :) ) raven has a friend marco who has been there for since she was 15 and she has Jackie her friend that teaches with her. things start happening and I found myself at the edge of my seat like "what?!?!" so many twists and turns, people are not as they seem. i loved every minute of it. I will say this though..I love Max!!! (& him with Jackie) He was amazing in this story. hes the only one that gets jax and his crazy ass moods and i love their friendship. After that ending (yes its a cliffy), I need to know what happens!! that 2nd book cant get here fast enough :) this was the first book written by this author and I highly recommend it. I will definitely be reading more from her ;)

  12. 5 out of 5

    Amy

    Oh! Oh Yeah! This debut book hit all 5 stars just right for me! It is FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC!!! Jax is the best billionaire character that I have read. Before you start think to yeah another rich and dominant man, think again he is nothing like your billionaires of the past- Christian or Jesse. This author have managed to capture an awesome vulnerability and playful side in Jax that is wonderfully refreshing. Raven is equally charming and you will love and latch onto her character immediately. Somewha Oh! Oh Yeah! This debut book hit all 5 stars just right for me! It is FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC!!! Jax is the best billionaire character that I have read. Before you start think to yeah another rich and dominant man, think again he is nothing like your billionaires of the past- Christian or Jesse. This author have managed to capture an awesome vulnerability and playful side in Jax that is wonderfully refreshing. Raven is equally charming and you will love and latch onto her character immediately. Somewhat naive but also persistent in her own right, she and Jax are a perfect combination. If you think this story is all about their quest to find love, you are wrong. I have developed lasting attachments to all the characters, Jackie, the best friend and Max, the body guard. This book takes you through so many twists and turn, you won't know what is coming next. There is of course the steamy sex and the love story; by there is also mystery and suspense that will have you tearing through the pages to see what happens next. I cannot wait for book two to see how this story continues. Utterly perfect debut Ms. Sederholt!! Congratulations, you have left me with the best book hangover I have had in a long time!

  13. 4 out of 5

    Melissa Kulis PA

    I loved this book, I loved how Theresa made the characters come to life. The book had me captivated from page one until the end. I love when you get the tingly feeling as the characters fall in love. I know an author has done a great job when you feel all the emotions that the characters feel. After all isn't that why we read romance books. I love the connection that Raven and Jax had from the beginning with the unfortunate or in this case fortunate coffee incident to the Nutella scene I loved e I loved this book, I loved how Theresa made the characters come to life. The book had me captivated from page one until the end. I love when you get the tingly feeling as the characters fall in love. I know an author has done a great job when you feel all the emotions that the characters feel. After all isn't that why we read romance books. I love the connection that Raven and Jax had from the beginning with the unfortunate or in this case fortunate coffee incident to the Nutella scene I loved every minute. I don't think I will ever be able to look at Nutella the same way again. My hats off to Theresa this was an amazing break through book for her, there are no limits to heights the future holds for such a talented author.

  14. 4 out of 5

    iloveladyporn

    The chemistry between Jax and Raven will have your e-reader heating up. When these two first run into each other Jax is mesmerized and Raven runs. Raven runs from Jax a lot, but Jax can be a bit overbearing. As their story unfolds it turns out their lives are more intertwined than anyone would have imagined. A lot of hot, juicy, steamy sex. This story is not only about Raven and Jax but Max and Jackie. The ending is a cliffhanger. This story is not only told in many different point of views, but The chemistry between Jax and Raven will have your e-reader heating up. When these two first run into each other Jax is mesmerized and Raven runs. Raven runs from Jax a lot, but Jax can be a bit overbearing. As their story unfolds it turns out their lives are more intertwined than anyone would have imagined. A lot of hot, juicy, steamy sex. This story is not only about Raven and Jax but Max and Jackie. The ending is a cliffhanger. This story is not only told in many different point of views, but there is a lot going on so you are always on edge wondering what is going to happen next.

  15. 5 out of 5

    Michelle

    Great book, loved the story line majorly bummed that it ended on a cliffhanger....hurry up with the second book!!!

  16. 5 out of 5

    Maureen Mckenzie

    Absolutely loved it- full of suspense, romance, hot men, you name it, it had it. A must read.

  17. 5 out of 5

    JBro

    3.5 Stars Review: This story has some promise, but I had a difficult time starting it, for several reasons. There are some slang phrases that are misused, as well as some pretty major grammatical issues - periods being used instead of commas, and vice versa being just an example. The point of view also switches back and forth, with no warning, not just from chapter to chapter, but paragraph to paragraph, and it's very confusing. Once you get past the initial errors and the confusing point of view 3.5 Stars Review: This story has some promise, but I had a difficult time starting it, for several reasons. There are some slang phrases that are misused, as well as some pretty major grammatical issues - periods being used instead of commas, and vice versa being just an example. The point of view also switches back and forth, with no warning, not just from chapter to chapter, but paragraph to paragraph, and it's very confusing. Once you get past the initial errors and the confusing point of view changes, the basic story is good, but I do think that I had a hard time connecting to the characters due to my initial difficult with the grammatical errors. Raven runs into Jax, literally runs into him, while leaving a coffee shop one day. He, a known playboy, is intrigued by this girl with beautiful violet eyes that then runs away from him. He takes the time to find out that she comes back to this coffee shop every day. Later that day, he fills in for his brother in law and goes to a Bring Your Parents event at his nephew's school, and Raven is actually the teacher. After that, he continues to track her down and gets her to go on a date with him. I liked his persistence! Things with their relationship escalate pretty quickly at that point, and, suddenly, several members of Jax's family begin to get threats, including Raven. Raven and Jax have some major chemistry, although, I did struggle with her being so hesitant about being physical with Jax to suddenly kind of jumping into doing some pretty major things, physically, with him - and without much discussion. As the story unfolds, Raven begins to share more about her history, and she actually has some pretty dangerous ties within her background. Everyone around them seems to be turning on them, and you begin to question who Raven and Jax can actually trust. Then, Raven is taken, all while finding out some dark secrets about her past that even she did not know. Jax and his best friend/security guard, Max, must look at the big picture and figure out some of these things in order to help Raven. This is where I had to kind of suspend my disbelief, however, because, not only do they find out where she is, they get the information quickly and are all of a sudden experts at how to drive a massive speed boat, hang-glide and base-jump down a cliff, which are some examples of things that I would be reading and think "where did this come from?". I will say this, however - the story moves quickly, and there is definitely suspense that keeps you guessing a little. Little details comes out in the final part of the book that you don't see coming until right before it happens. I like when I haven't figured out the whole plot of a book within the first few chapters, so that's why I feel like this has a good basic story. *Update: I have been notified that updates have been made to correct grammatical errors and to highlight the point of view switches which were so confusing for me, while reading.

  18. 5 out of 5

    Shanoff Reads

    I won this book from a giveaway several months back and finally was able to read it. I really enjoyed this book and then storyline. There is plenty if things going on to keep you wanting more. It is multiple POVs which makes the story even better. It is not told in third person but first person so each POV is told from a different person. The only bad part about that is sometimes it just switches without warning and I was sometimes trying to figure out who's POV I was reading at the time. So jus I won this book from a giveaway several months back and finally was able to read it. I really enjoyed this book and then storyline. There is plenty if things going on to keep you wanting more. It is multiple POVs which makes the story even better. It is not told in third person but first person so each POV is told from a different person. The only bad part about that is sometimes it just switches without warning and I was sometimes trying to figure out who's POV I was reading at the time. So just a tad confusing sometimes but not enough for me not to enjoy the book as a whole. There is so much going on in this book and I am sure the next will be just as packed with action, sexy bits and more. At times the transitions are a little choppy but again not enough the distract from the story. I like Raven and Jax's characters although at times they felt a little underdeveloped. Their relationship is hot and steamy and you can definitely feel the sexual chemistry between them but at times it feels like that is all that there was well at least in the first half. Their relationship did grow and you could feel the shift into love. Although you know that they love each other you feel the frustrations from both sides when it comes to Jax's overprotective nature and Ravens need to run from things all the time. One thing that is great about Ravens character is her ability to still be so sweet and positive after all that she has survived. Sometimes though it was a little frustrating that she didn't take her safety as serious as those around her. Jax definitely is her perfect match and the one to take care of her security. Max is another if my favorite characters and I like Jackie too. Those are two other POVs that we get from this story. Max is Jax's head of security and Jackie is Ravens best friend. Both of them lead lives that fit perfectly into this storyline their reactions to the happening around them are believable. This book is not at all what I thought is was going to be but that is a very good thing. There is quite a bit of suspense, mystery and some action. There are things that are not sunshine and Daisy's but more dark and twisted. There is so much that needs to be addressed and resolved and I can not wait to see what comes in book 2.

  19. 5 out of 5

    The Book Fairy Reviews

    Theresa has given us a story that holds all of that and so much more, the love between Jax and Raven is beautifully played through a series of lies, kidnapping and murderers. Suspenseful right? We have plot twists that will have your head spinning! She also gives us two budding romance stories not just one, which I thought was very well done. We have two couples that play an important role in this story the main couple is Jax and Raven. The heat between them is scorching! He is a man that is use Theresa has given us a story that holds all of that and so much more, the love between Jax and Raven is beautifully played through a series of lies, kidnapping and murderers. Suspenseful right? We have plot twists that will have your head spinning! She also gives us two budding romance stories not just one, which I thought was very well done. We have two couples that play an important role in this story the main couple is Jax and Raven. The heat between them is scorching! He is a man that is used to getting what he wants no questions asked but finds himself chasing after the one person that has turned his life upside down. Raven is a woman with a past that has made allusive with a tendency to run when things get to close of to heavy, but Jax if having none of it. When Jax decides that they will be a couple Raven has no choice but to give into her desires and see where this will take them. Being in the spotlight becomes an issue when both of their pasts come to destroy what they are desperately trying to build. Now let's talk about the heat level this couple share. I do believe I said it was scorching and I mean blazing, scorching HOT! Jax has dominating tendencies and enacts them frequently taking raven to new heights. Try to be in a comfortable, cool spot as your are reading because Jax will have you squirming. Now the second budding romance that we have in this book is Jackie and Max. max is Jax's body guard and best friend, Jackie is best friends with Raven. When the two of them meet they have an instant attraction that neither of them want to act on. Why? Well Max does not do relationships and Jackie has never been in one. but they can't fight the attraction they have towards one another and when they finally decide to come together their union is beautiful! But nothing in this book is easy and you will find that poor Jackie must suffer for the man that she has fallen in love with. What does that mean? Well it means that we have a cliff hanger that will have you biting your nails off! yes, I can;t wait for the next book in this series to come out. I promise I will keep you posted as to when that is announced.

  20. 4 out of 5

    Katie

    The first book in The Unraveled Trilogy, The Unraveling of Rave by Theresa Sederholt hits all the right places. I will admit it took me a while to get into it but once I did – boy was I hooked! I think all books that are part of a series take a while to develop and it took until a good 50% in before it really started to take shape and take shape it did! Suspense, drama, twists, turns, romance you name it’s in the book! I’m sorry to have to say this but move over Christian there’s a new hot billi The first book in The Unraveled Trilogy, The Unraveling of Rave by Theresa Sederholt hits all the right places. I will admit it took me a while to get into it but once I did – boy was I hooked! I think all books that are part of a series take a while to develop and it took until a good 50% in before it really started to take shape and take shape it did! Suspense, drama, twists, turns, romance you name it’s in the book! I’m sorry to have to say this but move over Christian there’s a new hot billionaire in town and he goes by the name of Jaxon James Phillips!! The story is about 27 year old Raven Anderson, a second grade teacher who has experiences a lot of heartache in her life. For once her life finally seems to be on track now that’s she's doing a job she loves. Unfortunately for Raven best laid plans don’t always work out especially when fate puts her in the direct path of Jaxon, owner of Raiders Inc, a corporate raiding company. Raven is suddenly thrust into the limelight and her dark past begins to creep up on her. So Raven has to do what she does best – and that’s run! Jaxon is used to getting what he wants – so he doesn’t understand why Raven keeps running away from him. As time goes on and he begins to slowly unravel the many layers of Raven he discovers something – something that puts everyone around them in danger. Will anyone survive? If you can overlook the repetitive use of some phrases this story has the potential to lead us into a great series. A little darker than 50 Shades of Grey but if you enjoyed that then you will definitely enjoy this one. The book is written from multiple points of views, mainly Raven and Jaxon but also Jackie and Maxwell. There are some great twists and turns that will keep you guessing until the very end and beyond because yes it does end on a cliff-hanger that will leave you wanting more. This is a great debut novel and I am looking forward to reading the next one in the series. I give The Unraveling of Raven by Theresa Sederholt 4 stars.

  21. 5 out of 5

    DJ Sakata

    Favorite Quotes: “I never had a teacher like her. I would have made sure to be held back, if I did.” “This is why you’re so good at what you do. You could split hairs with a bald man!” “I trust you with my heart and soul, and when you are ready, you’ll trust me with yours.” “You have taken me to heaven and there is no going back. You gave me a life worth living.” “That’s not God, baby, that’s all me.” My Review: Theresa Sederholt has been a delightful surprise. I am an instant fan-girl and am currently Favorite Quotes: “I never had a teacher like her. I would have made sure to be held back, if I did.” “This is why you’re so good at what you do. You could split hairs with a bald man!” “I trust you with my heart and soul, and when you are ready, you’ll trust me with yours.” “You have taken me to heaven and there is no going back. You gave me a life worth living.” “That’s not God, baby, that’s all me.” My Review: Theresa Sederholt has been a delightful surprise. I am an instant fan-girl and am currently kicking myself for allowing this treasure to languish on my kindle for so long. The Unraveling of Raven is intriguing, well-written, and smartly crafted. The characters are well-formed, complex, likable, and endlessly fascinating. I am enthralled with the story which is as suspenseful as it is deliciously steamy. Ms. Sederholt’s writing is easy to follow, comfortable, and well detailed - I have a clear vision of the appearance of each character as well as the “The Ivory Tower in the Sky.” I also enjoy the frequent application of clever and insightful humor, and love the idea of “The Happy Place.” I am so enamored with Ms. Sederholt – I intend to feast on her entire series as I fear I have become rather addicted.

  22. 5 out of 5

    Tia

    Wow this book had so many twists and turns, everytime I thought I knew what was going to happen, something new came up. It was a great book and I can't wait to read the next book in the series!Very well written with great characters and a great story line. Raven is a 2nd grade school teacher that accidently spills her morning coffee on a very sexy man on her way to work. He can't get her out of his head and makes a point to meet up with her every morning. They eventually have their first date an Wow this book had so many twists and turns, everytime I thought I knew what was going to happen, something new came up. It was a great book and I can't wait to read the next book in the series!Very well written with great characters and a great story line. Raven is a 2nd grade school teacher that accidently spills her morning coffee on a very sexy man on her way to work. He can't get her out of his head and makes a point to meet up with her every morning. They eventually have their first date and hit it off great, but that leads to the beginning of the problems that start pouring out of the woodwork like termites. Love, danger, intrigue, sexy characters, and steamy sex scenes.....make for a very awesome read!

  23. 4 out of 5

    Iris

    This book was GREAT!!! I loved it & want all of you to read it, like yesterday!!! It's so worth it! She made sure you were excited with every page you turn. The story was great! I am in LOVE with Jaxson & his family!!! It had love, sex drama, mystery & secrets! I am so looking forward to to her next book! Mrs. Sederholt is a brilliant author!!! This book was GREAT!!! I loved it & want all of you to read it, like yesterday!!! It's so worth it! She made sure you were excited with every page you turn. The story was great! I am in LOVE with Jaxson & his family!!! It had love, sex drama, mystery & secrets! I am so looking forward to to her next book! Mrs. Sederholt is a brilliant author!!!

  24. 4 out of 5

    Irene

    Meeting Mr. Right over spilt coffee Talk about a whirlwind adventure. The drama never seemed to stop. Imagine living your live and then boom you get all this information, kind of seems your life is one big fat joke. Every corner you turn out find something new. This is Raven's life. Meeting Mr. Right over spilt coffee Talk about a whirlwind adventure. The drama never seemed to stop. Imagine living your live and then boom you get all this information, kind of seems your life is one big fat joke. Every corner you turn out find something new. This is Raven's life.

  25. 4 out of 5

    Coco.V

    💝FREE on Amazon today (12/17/2018)!💝 Blurb: At 27 Raven Anderson experienced more heartache then anyone would in their lifetime. She felt she finally had her life on track, doing what she loved the most teaching second grade. The best-laid plans are not always the right path as Raven learns when fate puts her in the direct path of mega billionaire Jaxson James Phillips the owner of Raiders Inc. With the spot light now focused on Raven her past is threatening her future so she does what she does be 💝FREE on Amazon today (12/17/2018)!💝 Blurb: At 27 Raven Anderson experienced more heartache then anyone would in their lifetime. She felt she finally had her life on track, doing what she loved the most teaching second grade. The best-laid plans are not always the right path as Raven learns when fate puts her in the direct path of mega billionaire Jaxson James Phillips the owner of Raiders Inc. With the spot light now focused on Raven her past is threatening her future so she does what she does best run! The beautiful girl with the violet eyes left Jaxson James Phillips owner of Raiders Inc. Mr. corporate raider himself who never gets rattled totally speechless. Jax has always gotten whatever he wanted, so why was this beautiful girl running away from him? As time goes on he slowly unravels the many layers of Raven, but what he finds puts everyone around them in danger. Can anyone survive?

  26. 5 out of 5

    Darlene

    My head is still spinning from all the plot twists and different points of view. Raven a beautiful schoolteacher (both inside and out) literally bumps into every girls dream billionaire Jax, and neither of their lives is the same. The relationship between Raven and Jax is intense-especially the multitude of hot sex scenes. As their relationship deepens, Raven's past slowly catches up with her as more and more is revealed. Jax is a control freak whose past comes back as well. The story line was f My head is still spinning from all the plot twists and different points of view. Raven a beautiful schoolteacher (both inside and out) literally bumps into every girls dream billionaire Jax, and neither of their lives is the same. The relationship between Raven and Jax is intense-especially the multitude of hot sex scenes. As their relationship deepens, Raven's past slowly catches up with her as more and more is revealed. Jax is a control freak whose past comes back as well. The story line was fast paced and exciting- although the sex scenes were a little much. Cock heaven-really? The book did contain a multitude of grammatical errors which did detract from the otherwise captivating read. The story also ends with an insane cliffhanger. I loved the characters of Mick and Max-both added compassion and balance to the story line. In fact these two characters I recommend this book.

  27. 5 out of 5

    Laura

    10 stars for this book . All I can say is OMG!!!!!!!!!!! Raven is happy just being a teacher and hanging with her friends until she actually runs into Jaxson one morning (she really does run into him) and coffee spill on the both of them. Jaxson can't get her out of his mind and I think it was driving him a little crazy lol. So many emotions that run everywhere from love, hate, evil, good, and so many more. Raven has so many things in her that she doesn't not know many of them. Thank heaven for 10 stars for this book . All I can say is OMG!!!!!!!!!!! Raven is happy just being a teacher and hanging with her friends until she actually runs into Jaxson one morning (she really does run into him) and coffee spill on the both of them. Jaxson can't get her out of his mind and I think it was driving him a little crazy lol. So many emotions that run everywhere from love, hate, evil, good, and so many more. Raven has so many things in her that she doesn't not know many of them. Thank heaven for Jaxson for coming into her life. No spoilers from me but I had to get the second book in this series right away and it's almost impossible to put it down.

  28. 5 out of 5

    Jamie Wilson

    I have to say this book is a little wild for me but easy for me to skip most of it: BUT BEST series in a long while!! If I don’t stop I’ll have read all 3 books in 2 and half days!! DEFINITELY keeps you wanting to know what’s next!!! SO HARD TO PUT DOWN!!! GREAT JOB THANK YOU!! Lord knows threw all the stress we have right now I NEEDED a GOOD series to distract me and this has DEFINITELY done that!! Thank you again!!! Be prepared to get all 3 at once you WONT regret that decision!!!

  29. 5 out of 5

    Mary Brannian

    I have to be strong for everyone else; with her, I can just be... Raven, a 2nd grade teacher, is having a VERY bad day. First she oversleeps, then she runs full tilt into one of the most handsome men she has ever seen. If THAT'S not bad enough, Raven spills her coffee all over him AND herself. Jaxon is bored..bored, bored bored! There's no challenge in his job anymore. He needs a change... Well, you know, be careful what you wish for! When the beautiful, violet eyed raven haired beauty literally r I have to be strong for everyone else; with her, I can just be... Raven, a 2nd grade teacher, is having a VERY bad day. First she oversleeps, then she runs full tilt into one of the most handsome men she has ever seen. If THAT'S not bad enough, Raven spills her coffee all over him AND herself. Jaxon is bored..bored, bored bored! There's no challenge in his job anymore. He needs a change... Well, you know, be careful what you wish for! When the beautiful, violet eyed raven haired beauty literally runs into him, Jaxon thinks maybe his day is looking up! Well, at least until Raven disappears! What follows is an intriguing, fast paced romantic suspense filled thriller. Jason and Raven find themselves in danger repeatedly, but through it all they grow closer and closer, with enough steamy sex to satisfy almost everyone! Malevolence and malice swirl around them, slithering in the shadows... Waiting to pounce...

  30. 5 out of 5

    Ruth Bishop

    This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers. To view it, click here. This book captured me from the very first chapter I just couldn't put it down. So many twists in the story it's not even possible to describe. The characters are all Lovable and I could actually see this as a movie. Imagine running into a really hot guy at Starbucks and spilling coffee all over him. Jax is a take charge kind of guy and really wants to get to know the beautiful stranger that spilled coffee on him.evry character holds their own story and I'm so looking forward to the next one. This book captured me from the very first chapter I just couldn't put it down. So many twists in the story it's not even possible to describe. The characters are all Lovable and I could actually see this as a movie. Imagine running into a really hot guy at Starbucks and spilling coffee all over him. Jax is a take charge kind of guy and really wants to get to know the beautiful stranger that spilled coffee on him.evry character holds their own story and I'm so looking forward to the next one.

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